Author: Suzanne Kelman

  • Sue the Screenwriter | From Script to Screen—A Local Writer’s Ten Year Journey to the Oscars

    Sue the Screenwriter | From Script to Screen—A Local Writer’s Ten Year Journey to the Oscars

    BY SUZANNE KELMAN
    February 25, 2014

    Walking the Red Carpet in Hollywood is a long way from Bob Nelson’s usual writing routine when he’s at home in Freeland, Washington. That normally consists of him doing research during the day and then creating words on a page from 9 p.m. until 3 a.m. with only the owls for company.

    Poster for the Acadaemy Award movie, "Nebraska"
    Poster for the Acadaemy Award movie, “Nebraska”

    But accolades are to be expected if you write a screenplay of the caliber of “Nebraska,” which has been nominated for six Academy Awards, including a Best Original Screenplay for Nelson.

    As I talked to the author, 57, about his experiences it became obvious that his own journey has been as interesting as the movie’s main character. “Nebraska” is a story about Woody, an aging alcoholic played by Bruce Dern, who sets out on a cross-country adventure to claim a bogus million dollars in a marketing sweepstakes. Overcoming jaded family members and old adversaries, Woody uses dogged determination to pursue the money he believes is rightfully his. Though things don’t turn out exactly as expected, he eventually has his moment to shine.

    That is no doubt the kind of determination Bob Nelson needed to believe his story would eventually come to life after its own 10-year trek. It was a journey that started in 1999 when the Seattle-based TV show he was writing for, “Almost Live,” came to an end. With unemployment looming, Nelson wrote the first draft of “Nebraska,” a story he had been thinking about for a while. He admitted he relied on his personal family experiences to create its world, and no more so than for the character Woody, who is based on his own father.

    “I heard my Dad’s voice in my head when I would write a line that came out of Woody,” Nelson commented, “particularly the voice in his later years when the alcohol had slowed him down. By that time my father’s manner was a little less verbose, a little more terse with his midwestern taciturness,” Nelson said. “But, for creative purposes, I did make his character a little more cantankerous.” He drew the rest of the characters from visits to his extended family in the Midwest, of which he has vivid childhood memories.

    With the first draft completed, he headed off to Hollywood with no idea of its potential, believing it would serve as a nice writing sample for producers and perhaps be a “little movie” he could shop around the Indie Market.

    Screenwriter Bob Nelson (right) with actor Will Forte (photo credit Dannie Zhao, VIFF)
    Screenwriter Bob Nelson (right), actor Will Forte (photo credit Dannie Zhao, VIFF)

    His screenplay, however, was destined for bigger things and, through a number of serendipitous connections, it caught the attention of Alexander Payne, the successful director of the movies “Sideways” and “The Descendants.” Payne, who has spent 20 years proving he can turn an indie into a mainstream movie, saw the potential in the gritty, character-driven comedy and it became a much larger Paramount Studio’s project.

    Even with all the power players in place, it still took a decade to complete, with Payne agreeing to direct it just as he was gearing up to shoot “Sideways.” Despite the long wait, Nelson always remained optimistic that the movie would be made. He joked that it gave Bruce Dern ten years to age into the perfect version of the onscreen lead character, the actor Payne had seen in the title role from the beginning. Nelson added that now “he couldn’t see anybody else in that role.” He commended the director’s instincts for casting the perfect actor and sticking to his original gut feelings about Dern, even after a second round of casting auditions.

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    Bruce Dern (right) in a scene from “Nebraska”

    It seemed that the casting experience was a precedent of the collaboration process to come between Payne and Nelson, who admitted he lucked out getting a director of Payne’s ability on his first movie. A director known for his drive to make movies about real characters, Payne was very respectful of the script and the characters Nelson had created. The director even had a hand in the ending. A novice feature writer, Nelson admitted he had originally written a more explosive end to the story. Once it became an Alexander Payne movie, however, the director encouraged him to find an alternative ending driven by the arc of the main characters. The results speak for themselves.

    Unfortunately for Nelson, his father—who has passed away—will never get to see the role his son created based on him, but his mother, who is 85, actually had a small part in the movie. Living close to the town in “Nebraska” where they were shooting, she was invited to be an extra when she visited her son on the set one day. She also had the added thrill of joining him on the red carpet for the Chinese Theatre premier in Hollywood. Nelson hopes she also may be able to join him again for the Academy Awards celebration.

    There is one difference, however, between Woody’s journey and Bob Nelson’s: while Woody was really always on a fool’s errand, Bob’s journey of success appears to be just beginning. The way I see it, no matter whether he gets his statue or not on March 2, with the notoriety he has achieved with “Nebraska,” his future is looking golden either way.

    Sue the Screenwriter (photo by Kim Tinuviel)
    Sue the Screenwriter (photo by Kim Tinuviel)

    Suzanne Kelman is an awarding-winning screenwriter that has been optioned. She will be teaching a new six-week screenwriting basics class from 10 a.m. to noon on Saturday mornings starting on March 22nd – April 26th. For more info about this class, email Suzanne at suzkelman@gmail.com

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  • Sue the Screenwriter | A screenplay adventure with Superbloggers!

    Sue the Screenwriter | A screenplay adventure with Superbloggers!

    BY SUZANNE KELMAN
    Dec. 13, 2013

    INTERIOR, WHIDBEY LIFE MAGAZINE HEADQUARTERS – SOMEWHERE ON EARTH

    The “Life Cave” is stacked from floor to ceiling with photos, articles, art stories, supplies and anything a goat can produce.

    At the desk under a pile of old island periodicals, SUPERHERO SUE is slumped, head down, mumbling to herself.

    An alarm is triggered. 

    INTENSE RINGING SOUNDS AND FLASHING LIGHTS  

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA, a cute, cocky broad with great legs, dashes into the office with a tablet featuring the mock-up  for a glossy print edition of Whidbey life Magazine. She drops it gingerly on the desk.

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    It’s bad isn’t it?

    Sue still slumped, doesn’t look up.

    SUPERHERO SUE
    The worst. We are not going to make it; we are nowhere near.

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    What! No, that’s impossible. What are we going to do?

    Sue pulls her head from the desk and slams her hand down on a button that instantly cuts the ringing alarms.

    SUPERHERO SUE
    We are going to have to go to the extreme. Call in the Superbloggers!

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    Really? It’s that desperate?

    SUPERHERO SUE
    I’m afraid so!

    One hour later, the Life Cave is full of an odd assortment of superheroes with uncanny blogging powers.

    BENEVOLENT BOB, a highly skilled cartoonist, who also happens to be… a panda.

    VIVACIOUS VICKY, skilled in mixing dangerously sweet concoctions of food with funky names, who also speaks goat.

    JUBILANT JUDITH, just back from sweeping the sky — which she minds.

    And lastly, we believe there may be ELUSIVE ERIC, but as he is also a master of disguise… one can never really be quite sure.

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    These are all the Superbloggers we could get on such short notice.

    SUPERHERO SUE
    I’m afraid it’s worse than we thought.

    VIVACIOUS VICKY
    What! You mean worse than trying to lug defrosted water to 30 goats on a November morning and then… trying to milk them?

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    Yes.

    JUBILANT JUDITH
    Worse then trying to board a 4 p.m. ferry at 3:30 p.m. on July 3?

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    Yes.

    BENEVOLENT BOB
    Worse then trying to find an adequate supply of bamboo shoots to feed a 300 pound Panda on an island in the Northwest in January?

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    Yes. Much worse.

    A DOG
    (Sounding decidedly like Elusive Eric)
    Worse than trying to get a ticket to the last night of “The Full Monty” at WICA?

    SUPERHERO SUE
    Well, maybe not that bad, but nearly.

    ELUSIVE ERIC
    (Now disguised as a chicken)
    I think we need to tell Whidbey Island the truth.

    SUPERHERO SUE
    The truth! The truth! WHIDBEY CAN’T HANDLE THE TRUTH!

    Benevolent Bob jumps to his paws.

    BENEVOLENT BOB
    What truth? I thought this was just a campaign to get the Whidbey Life Magazine into a printed format?

    All the other Superbloggers look sheepishly from one to the other. 

    All that can be heard in the room are… crickets. 

    A fern walks up to Bob and puts a frond on his shoulder… [It might be Elusive Eric.]

    FERN
    We didn’t want to worry you, Bob, because we know how difficult it is for you just to draw without having opposable thumbs.

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    But the problem is much bigger then just the printing of a magazine.

    BENEVOLENT BOB
    How can it be bigger than having a whole island of artists with no periodical to call their own? Do you know how many artists we have on this island?

    Suddenly the door bursts open and in rushes JOYOUS JAN with her hands full of charts, graphs and a piece of bread spread with what looks decidedly like an illegal substance or, as it’s known for F.D.A. purposes, “Dulce de leche.”

    JOYOUS JAN
    I have them all; the final numbers. Unfortunately, it’s as bad as we thought!

    With one sweep she clears the cluttered table, throws down the charts and pulls out her whiteboard and scribbles hurried equations. 

    VIVACIOUS VICKY
    Can the ferry be saved?

    JOYOUS JAN
    I don’t think so.

    BENEVOLENT BOB
    What? What’s wrong with the ferry?

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    What about the sinkholes? The landslides?

    SUPERHERO SUE
    The whales?

    Jan looks down… then shakes her head.

    JUBILANT JUDITH
    This is terrible! It will make my job minding the sky so much harder. I won’t know what weather to prepare for!

    BENEVOLENT BOB
    What? Will someone please tell me what is going on? I was under the impression that we were just doing an Indiegogo called “Roll the Presses for WLM” to create a print addition of the magazine for tourists and off-line folks, to help them find out about the island’s artists and what’s happening on Whidbey.

    The armchair get’s up and speaks; the voice is once again… strangely familiar.

    ARMCHAIR
    We are going to have to tell him.

    All the Superbloggers look from one to the other; there is a long hard silence. Superhero Sue steps forward.

    SUPERHERO SUE
    A few months ago, through the list of the Drew-ids, we obtained a cunning, second-hand device (which we of course paid 10 percent to the list for) that measures solar flares, biomass, volcanic activity, and the amount of Mr. Mobley’s sauce consumed.

    Joyous Jan approaches the white board and writes down more figures.

    JOYOUS JAN
    We have figured out that because of global warming and rapid climate change and the interminable amount of sauce consumed, that Puget Sound is going to be knocked off kilter by precisely .3758942789 degrees West on Dec. 22.

    BENEVOLENT BOB
    Well, that doesn’t sound serious. What’s going to happen to the whales?

    JOYOUS JAN
    We have calculated that if we don’t weigh down the ferry with the precise gigawatts to change up the catalytic convertor, reverse the warp core emissions, and reboot the laser cannons, the sound will reset to 10 minus pie (apple) on Dec. 22.

    SUPERHERO SUE
    At that point, the ferry will list in such a way as to be naked to the untrained eye, but catastrophic to the Island of Whidbey!

    JOYOUS JAN
    That figure equals the exact weight that can be produced with 1,000 copies of a printed edition of Whidbey Life Magazine.

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    Without the printed magazine on the ferry, an unprecedented chain reaction will occur on our shores, resulting in tidal waves, sinkholes, and huge landslides that will dam the Sound, preventing the whales from ever visiting Langley again!

    BENEVOLENT BOB
    I don’t believe you. That sounds ridiculous.

    JOYOUS JAN
    Exactly! That’s what people on Whidbey will say if we tell them the truth.

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    So we have had to go undercover with this campaign.

    JUBILANT JUDITH
    Oh. What are we going to do?

    A TALKING HAT STAND
    Why don’t we ask SMASHING SUE to write a blog piece? Maybe, just maybe, if all three of her readers contributed to the campaign… ?

    JOYOUS JAN
    It’s a long-shot, but, yes, yes, it might just work!

    PASSIONATE PATRICIA
    Averting disaster?

    JOYOUS JAN
    ONLY if we get all three.

    WILL THE THREE READERS OF SUE THE SCREENWRITER PLEASE CONTRIBUTE TO THE INDIEGOGO CAMPAIGN?

    WILL WHIDBEY BE SAVED FROM DISAPPEARING INTO A SINKHOLE?

    WILL THE WHALES HAVE TO MOVE TO LYNNWOOD? 

    ONLY YOU KNOW THE ANSWER TO THESE QUESTIONS.

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    Screenwriter Suzanne Kelman will teach a new, six-week screenwriting basics class from 10 a.m. to noon on Saturday mornings starting on Jan 18. There will be an open house on Saturday, Jan. 11 for anyone interested in more details about the class. For info about the class or the open house email Suzanne at suzkelman@gmail.com.

     

  • Sue the Screenwriter cheers on indie filmmakers

    Sue the Screenwriter cheers on indie filmmakers

    BY SUZANNE KELMAN, Sept. 27, 2013

    Hurrah for the independent!

    I love this time of year. There’s nothing more enjoyable after a summer of energetic activity then closing my door, lighting a fire and settling down to watch a good movie. And when I’m in the right mood, there is nothing I love more than a good independent film.

    I am fascinated by indies for many reasons, one of them being it’s an opportunity to partake in another storyteller’s personal dream or passion.  Often choosing uncomfortable subject matter or thematic elements that just wouldn’t work in the mainstream, an indie filmmaker burns with a story that just has to be told; one they were compelled to write and produce, and somehow some of that raw passion always seems to spill out onto the screen.

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    This summer I was invited to attend several indie screenings, one of them written and co-directed by my friend, Persephone Vandegrift. A group of friends and I attended the premiere of her movie, “All Things Hidden,” in downtown Seattle.  This brave story aims to draw attention to the lasting effects of domestic abuse on children. In a recent interview with Her magazine, Persephone told Kyna Morgan that she hoped the film would leave people with hope and courage, no matter how young or old they are and no matter what the situation.  “All Things Hidden” was recently selected for the Seattle Social Justice Film Festival, and I applaud her efforts to bring domestic violence issues to the forefront. You can read more about “All Things Hidden” at http://www.allthingshidden.com.

    Indies can also be fun.

    Another premiere I attended was for the film camp project here on Whidbey Island.  Run by film advocate and tireless volunteer, Chris Douthitt, this had to be my favorite screening for its sheer fun factor. Basically, groups of young people are given a camera, some editing equipment and three weeks. During that time they have to write, cast, direct, film, act in and edit a movie.

    The last couple of years, I have been invited there on the first day of camp to advise them on their screenplays. I am always in awe when I arrive three weeks later for the screening of a complete movie experience, including posters and blooper reels.  And talking about indie creativity, I did wonder after reading the script on the first day how one of the filmmakers was going to film a “demonic hellhound.” Fortunately for us somebody’s dog obliged and was filmed in such a way that it didn’t really look like he was trying to lick his victim to death.

    I actually think the most exciting time in history for indies is right now. In a recent interview with the Hollywood Reporter, Steven Spielberg predicted the inevitable collapse of the established film industry due to the chances of high-budget movies flopping.  I, however, think the indie market is going to continue to grow. How can it not, with filmmakers tapping into social media, Kickstarter and Indieflix to garner support? This fact, I think, is reflected in the growth of film festivals over the past decade. Writer/producer Stephen Follows recently did a very interesting study on film festivals and found that there are about 3,000 film festivals worldwide, with 75 percent of them created in the last 10 years.

    Another reason I love indies is because I always feel I’m an active collaborator in the production process. Half the anticipation of going to see an indie movie set in space, for example, is in seeing how they manage to pull it off. I am often in awe of the creative choices a film crew has to make to fully tell their story, but still appease a tight budget.

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    Sue the Screenwriter lends her advice to young filmmakers at a screening in Oak Harbor.

    That was one of the things highlighted, when I touched base with Orson Ossman, another local filmmaker whose film premiered this year. When I asked him what the hardest part of filming his recent indie “The Phoenix Project” was, he admitted that the lack of crew and budgetary constraints were tough. The group that call themselves the Ironwood Gang had a very short time frame to pull it off, which left them with little room for error. In order to do produce the film, they had to live and work together in a small space. Orson admitted that going in they had zero contingencies, plus filming a full-length feature was a steep learning curve for them.

    Hard to believe, because when I attended the screening of the movie, which is about four scientists’ quest to create life, I thought it was beautifully filmed and had some incredibly heartfelt moments, along with a memorable score.

    Orson has certainly come a long way from the first time I saw him onstage as a tap dancing reindeer!  I wish the Ironwood Gang all luck as they move forward to take “The Phoenix Project” onto the film festival circuit. You can follow their journey at the Ironwood Gang.

    Orson tells me the Ironwood Gang intends on making many movies together. I was glad to hear it, as I settled down to pick another indie for the evening. It’s comforting to know that we will still have something to watch if Hollywood implodes into a golden ball of glitz and glamour. And by the way, if that happens, don’t worry Steven, there will always be a place waiting for you behind an indie camera. We’ve heard you’ve got talent.

    Suzanne Kelman will be teaching a six-week screenwriting basics class from 10 a.m. to noon on Saturday mornings Oct. 12 through Nov. 16. Look for more details at Whidbey Life Magazine and on Drewslist, or you can email Sue the Screenwriter for more info at suzkelman@gmail.com.

     

  • Sue the Screenwriter pays tribute to a TV actor and childhood influence

    BY SUZANNE KELMAN
    July 19, 2013

    “Remembering Ike”

    Last week the death of Joe Conley happened with little hype or fanfare; his passing over-shadowed by much more sensational things in the news, such as plane and train crashes, and controversial court decisions.

    And why wouldn’t it?  Even though Joe Conley worked in the film industry, he was no Robert Redford or Lawrence Oliver. He had no rich extensive body of work to leave behind. He was just an 85-year-old actor, who had lived a good and long life.

    But for me, the passing of the man who immortalized the character of Ike Godsey in the 70’s T.V. show, The Walton’s, felt like a small death of my childhood innocence.

    The Walton’s series, which ran from 1971 to 1981, was a formative part of my childhood. Not only did I want to be one of the Walton’s, I would often find myself asking questions like, “Now what would Mary Ellen do about this?” Or “What would Olivia Walton advise me to do here?”

    The late Joe Conley as Ike Godsey on the set of the Waltons. (Photo courtesy of deadline.com)
    The late Joe Conley as Ike Godsey on the set of the Waltons. (Photo courtesy of deadline.com)

    I would braid my hair just like Elizabeth, and my brother and sisters, still needing the gentle security of a familiar voice before settling down alone in a darkened room, would playfully call out to each other “Goodnight John-boy.”  “Goodnight Mary Ellen.”

    So, when I read the news of Mr. Conley’s death, it grieved and saddened me. I realized that my adult brain had never really taken that leap from its own childhood imaginings; that step of no return that one day informs us that there are no tooth fairies, or that the roaring in the sky is not actually a dragon, but just an airplane soaring overhead.

    And because my childhood mind had not taken this important rite-of-passage, up until this point, somewhere in the far reaches of my mind, I had actually still believed that Ike owned a little store on Walton’s mountain, and he and his wife Corabeth were happily working through their Golden Years, with hundreds of Walton grandbabies doing a brisk trade in sugar and fabric.

    As I measured my strong reaction for the death of a fictional character whom I hadn’t watched in years, I found myself asking what is it about this family-focused TV show from a bygone era that had got under my skin? Did I want to live through the Great Depression running around a mountain in Virginia barefoot or killing chickens with my own hands?

    Well, no.

    But did I want to live in a world where I could sit at a table and my voice was important? Where a loving and caring family was all that truly mattered to make it through any obstacle? Where I was surrounded by a small, close-knit community of caring, loving people?

    Well, hell yes!

    And this is when I realized that in a world of cookie-cutter T.V. shows, and dramatic C.G.I-indulgent movies, real storytelling is a very different animal. It should strive, in whatever form your “Walton Mountain” fancies takes you, to give us a sense of place in the world; a true sense of connection, a place where we can hang our hat and say that what home, love, joy, happiness looks like to me.

    And that’s what The Walton’s series represented to me, storytelling at its purest form. Sure, the thrilling movies that scare or shock us have their place, but their impact can be no sharper or long-reaching than a bee sting. True storytelling has the ability to weave its way deep under our layers and into the fabric of our hearts. It reminds us that the world can be a good and wonderful place.

    We know when we are in the presence of good screenwriting or storytelling. Because we are not just swept away for a minute, but find ourselves suspending belief in such a way that we actually start to question whether what we are watching is real or even possible.

    I feel fortunate that I found my own kind of “Walton’s Mountain” right here on Whidbey Island. A place I call home; a place that embodies all that is important to me. Beauty and nature surround me at every turn, and I live in a thriving, caring community that I love being a member of.  But the dream of its possibility was born in a darkened room, in front of the television set, 30 plus years ago.

    In an interview for The-Waltons.com, Conley said he knew that the “Waltons” role had forever marked him.

    “To millions of people I am Ike Godsey,” he said. “People walk up and just call me Ike and carry on a conversation like we are old friends. I have to remember that for 10 years, I did visit their home every week. To them I am an old friend or a member of the family.”

    Yes, you were Joe Conley. Thank you for your contribution to my growing-up years. I am grateful for a show that we could watch as a family, that was wholesome and, in its own gentle way, thought-provoking. A place I could say, yes one day that’s what home will look like to me.

    Goodnight Ike… and God bless.

    Suzanne Kelman is a multi-award winning, optioned screenwriter. She has just finished editing her comedy novel, “The Rejected Ladies Club Roadtrip,” that will be available for purchase on Amazon in the fall.  She has also just completed her latest screenplay “Collision.” Her previous screenplay, “Illusion” was a winner in June in the Hollywood screenplay competition, “100 Screenplays.” Kelman enjoys teaching screenwriting classes at her home studio in Bayview. If interested, email suzkelman@gmail.com for details.

     

  • Sue the Screenwriter on how to keep up a writing schedule when the sun is calling your name

    SUZANNE KELMAN, May 17, 2013

    So it’s that time again already. The lilacs are blooming, hummers are at the feeders, and as the new bunny emerges and the sun is starting to shine. Who wants to stay inside and write?

    I was out to have a glass of wine with friends this week and one of them asked me a question I get asked a lot: “What is your writing schedule?”

    So I thought as the weather continues to warm and try its best to lure us away from our typewriters, computers and writing desks, I would share the rules of writing that keep me on track. This is not so you can spend the days indoors, but so you can get your writing organized and done and enjoy the glorious weather guilt free.

    For a couple of years now I have followed a writing practice created by producer/screenwriter Scott Myers. He calls it 1,2,7,14. You can read the full version of here.

    What is so great about this way of working is that it is simple, and once you get the swing of it, you will see how it works easily in your life, especially on a sunny day!

    This is a format created for screenwriters, but I bet it could easily be adapted for a novel writer, too.  So this is how it works; you just have to remember these four important numbers.

    1,2,7,14.

    “1” Read 1 screenplay per week. (Or a book if you’re a novelist.) Pick out your favorite movies. Try scripts in different genres to experience different tones and atmospheres. But every week, read at least one full-length movie screenplay. There are several great sites online to get scripts. My favorite is the Internet Movie Script Database because it provides full scripts, with all the action lines included and not just a transcript.

    “2” Watch 2 movies per week. (Novelist could watch a classic) Go to the Clyde (or your local movie theater) and watch one movie for sheer entertainment value. Rub shoulders with a real crowd to remind you of your target audience. Then watch one movie at home to study it. Note its major plot points. As I am writing a thriller at the moment, I am studying Hitchcock, the master of suspense.

    “7” Write 7 pages per week. (This works for writers, too.) That’s one page per day. It may take you 10 minutes, it may take you an hour, but however long it takes, you knock out a page per day so that every week, you produce 7 script pages.

    “14” Work 14 hours per week prepping a story. (Also great for writers to get into the habit of doing it.) While you are writing one story, you are prepping another. Research. Brainstorming. Character development. Plotting. Writing one project, prepping another. Two hours per day so that every week, you devote 14 hours to prep.

    Remember these simple numbers: 1,2,7,14.

    Those are simple, clear goals. Daily goals, weekly goals.

    If you do this, here’s what you will have done in one year’s time:

    • You will have read 52 screenplays.
    • You will have watched 104 movies
    • You will have written 2 feature-length screenplays.

    So, why not enjoy the nice weather guilt free? Get up early and write that first page; download a screenplay to read in the sun in the afternoon; prep your story once the sun goes down; then save your home movie watching for the weekend and make it an outdoor cinema event in your own back yard.

    Have a lovely summer!

    Suzanne Kelman is a multi-award winning screenwriter. Two of her screenplays have been optioned and are in development, while another is in pre-production and due to begin filming in Europe this year.  Kelman will run a week-long screenwriting class during the summer at her home studio in Bayview, the dates of which will be announced on the magazine. If interested, email suzkelman@gmail.com.

  • Sue the Screenwriter can’t resist the spark of a good story

    SUZANNE KELMAN, March 15, 2013

    “All Closet Screenwriters – Please Raise Your Hand”

    My absolute favorite part of being a storyteller has to be when a story hits you like a slap in the face with a wet kipper. And it can happen just like the 80’s martini commercial … “anytime, anyplace, and anywhere.”

    Once I was just reading my way through food labels in the supermarket thinking about having Mexican food for dinner when suddenly I overheard a snippet of a conversation that went something like this….

    “So if only she had chopped all that wood they would still be together today!”

    Suzanne Kelman's latest script is "Illusion" and won the best screenplay award for Script-a-thon 2012. (Photo courtesy of Kelman)
    Suzanne Kelman’s latest script is “Illusion” and won the best screenplay award for Script-a-thon 2012. (Photo courtesy of Kelman)

    That’s all it took. Suddenly the next thing I knew, my mind was whirling off in a million different directions like a terrier chasing a herd of bunnies (or is it a Bobbitt of bunnies or something?) imaginatively checking around every bush, under every piece of sod, tree and stone.

    What wood? Why was she chopping? Why was it so pivotal in their relationship?

    It was about the time my muddy snout emerged from its third consecutive rabbit hole when I was struck with an idea – a brilliant, non-stick, sparkly, voluptuous idea. And, as is often the case with me, a comedic idea.

    At that point, I could hardly breathe as I started checking off all the incredible scenarios that could come out of that one brilliant idea.

    Suddenly my shopping basket was tossed asunder as I made my way hastily out of the store saying under my breath, “Out of my way! Pregnant writer coming through.”

    I raced to my car, holding that sparkling idea ahead of me like a flaming torch hoping to not lose a fragment of it before I got home to type it on my computer.

    So it is, being a passionate storyteller or “concept collector,” as I like to call myself. Some people collect antiques, I collect interesting ideas. And that is how I first became a screenwriter.

    A couple of years ago, I took a year off from my theatre work and had a flaming torch of an idea that I thought was a stage play, but something odd happened every time I wrote something down: I saw it as pictures in a movie.

    So after about thirty frustrated pages, I decided to look at writing it as a screenplay instead. As I knew nothing about screenwriting, I went to my usual place of learning: Tube University (You Tube) and typed in “how to write a screenplay,” and from a dozen cobbled-together video tutorials from people I could have given birth to, I finished my first screenplay and found my passion in the process.

    I had tried the “writing thing” before – novels, short stories, etc. – but always got bored halfway through a story because of all the description. I had to tell the reader how the characters were feeling, how the mother, brother, auntie and dog were feeling.

    Screenwriting is so different. It allows me the thrill of telling a story without all the writing; it’s all about pictures. You know what they say about how a picture paints a thousand words? Well, at last I could tell story without a thousand words!

    You can start a screenplay with a guy standing on the edge of the Golden Gate Bridge in crumbled clothes, looking down at an old picture of himself and a girl both smiling, and then show him letting go of the picture as he looks down at the water below. You already know what’s going on, right?  I admit that was a bit cliché – but that’s the art of screenwriting. It’s all about how to show not tell.  This is often how I start a screenplay; through a snippet of gossip that intrigues me or a visual picture that haunts me. In fact, that happened with my latest screenplay.

    I was eating a bowl of vegetable soup when suddenly a dramatic picture popped into my head. I saw an odd-looking man in a jumbled apartment, sitting in the one pristine room, painstakingly watching a wall full of ticking clocks as smoke poured under the door of his apartment. I had no idea who he was or why those clocks were more important that being burned to death, but I knew as I worked on it like a jigsaw puzzle, my mind would start gathering together all the parts of the story. The story ended up coming together as the screenplay “Illusion,” which won the Script-a-thon 2012 screenwriting competition.

    So, maybe you’re the same way. Maybe you have story ideas, or see pictures. Maybe you’ve tried writing them and, like me, have given up because writing took too much, you know, writing. Maybe your storytelling needs to come out on the screen, and maybe deep inside you there is a screenwriter trying to get out.
    Why not give screenwriting a go?

    Suzanne Kelman is a multi-award winning screenwriter. Two of her screenplays have been optioned and are in development, while another is in pre-production and due to begin filming in Europe in 2013. Kelman currently enjoys teaching screenwriting classes each month at her home studio in Bayview. If interested, email suzkelman@gmail.com for details.

  • Sue the Screenwriter on sending her work off the cliff of judgement

    SUZANNE KELMAN, Feb. 1, 2013

    “Jumping off a Cliff and Shouting Wheeee!”

    When I was in my 20s, I had an incredible experience while I was working and living in Spain. I drove out to the lakes in mountains of southern Spain and leapt from a high cliff into the clear blue waters 20 feet below.

    Now you are probably thinking, so what? But for me, a confirmed acrophobic, who likes her feet planted firmly on the ground at all times, it took a couple of glasses of wine and a lot of coaxing from my dare-devil friends on that trip.

    I still remember as I stepped out into absolutely nothingness, the sheer fear that raced through my entire body, only to be followed by acute feeling of exhilaration and the need to scream “wheeeee” about halfway down.

    Being a writer can sometimes feel a bit like that.  I think one of a writer’s greatest thrills is to have the work read aloud to them, and one of a writer’s greatest fears is to have their work read aloud to them.

    I have had exactly that very experience in a darkened black box theatre on a Sunday afternoon in December in North Hollywood.

    It had been just about a month before when I had received the exciting news, that my current script “Illusion” had not only placed in the top three in comedy category, but it had been judged by Scott Rosenfelt (producer, “Home Alone”) as the best overall script of the competition.

    To say I was ecstatic is an understatement, there was dancing and hooting and hollering as I read the email titled “congratulations.” It outlined in great detail the girth of exciting prizes that I would now be receiving including my main prize, a staged reading of my script by professional actors in a theatre in LA.  My husband was practically packing before I finished reading out the sentence to him.

    As the weekend of the reading approached, all I could think about was a nice sunny weekend break in California in December with my family and my writing partner who was joining me for moral support.

    And to be honest I didn’t give the actual read through an awful lot of thought, until the morning of the event.

    It was about the time I was staring down out my California breakfast that I realized a group of strangers were about to read my script, out loud, to people.  What if it wasn’t funny? Or the story was flat, or it didn’t make any sense!

    It didn’t seem to occur to me during this inner dialogue that if the producer of “Home Alone,’ one of the most successful Christmas movies of all time, liked it, and then maybe it wasn’t so bad. This thought didn’t occur to me because the dreaded writer’s curse of self-doubt had leapt up at me from my scrambled eggs like Jaws and wasn’t about to let me go.

    So there we were an hour later, in this lovely black box called “The Rose Theatre” in Burbank.  We walked inside, and as we did I overheard the actors talking to each other about their characters, my characters, discussing them at great length as if they were real. And it was right then I had that leap in my consciousness.

    I had created something that was about to become real; brought to life by these actors, and the rush was intoxicating.

    So, I just couldn’t help myself as we settled into to the darkened theater and the stage manager read the words, “fade in…” and started the first line of my script; my 5-year-old self couldn’t help but gather herself for a story. So what if it was mine, this experience was exciting.

    I did the expected “writer” thing as they read for 90 minutes. I took notes and outlined text that didn’t work in my copy of the script, but honestly all I could think the whole time was about the amazing journey I was on with a group of people who seemed to actually like the story, they laughed, they cried, and at the end they clapped and then I cried.

    Yes, it was intimidating, and yes it was incredible, but more than anything it was real, and it was my work and now as the actors claimed their characters it was their’s too.

    And as I watched the audience react and enjoy it, I found myself thinking there is nothing more exhilarating then leaping off a cliff with absolute fear and half way down finding yourself needing to shout wheee!!!!

    Suzanne Kelman is a multi-award winning screenwriter. Two of her screenplays have been optioned and are in development, while another is in pre-production and due to begin filming in Europe in 2013. Kelman currently enjoys teaching screenwriting classes each month at her home studio in Bayview. If interested, email suzkelman@gmail.com for details.

  • Sue the Screenwriter challenges the determination of spell check

    SUZANNE KELMAN, Jan. 18, 2013

    “@#$$%%!  Spell Check!”

    I’m pretty sure the spell check on my computer is a Taurus. He can be bossy and stubborn and like a crazed English teacher, is forever underlining in green and red any word he doesn’t approve of.

    It’s not that I don’t like Tauruses. I have many great friends whose sun was twinkling there the day they were born. It’s just my spell check seems to have an abundance of all the sign’s negative traits!

    Now, I’m a Capricorn, so I can be pretty headstrong too, so we often have on-screen tangles that go something like this:

    Me: (Typing) Im going out.

    Spell Check: Are you sure you want to use the word Im?

    Me: “Yes.” (I say out loud and I type it in again.)

    Spell Check: You obviously didn’t notice I underlined it in red, so I’m doing it again.

    I ignore his patronizing red zigzag line.

    Spell Check: I can tell you’re not listening, so I will underline the whole sentence in green.

    Spell Check: Also you know “imp” would work better.

    Me: I don’t want “imp.” “Imp” going out doesn’t make any sense! And how often, realistically, do you use the word “imp” over the age of five!

    Spell Check: Well, that’s fragmented anyway!

    Me: (Making a raspberry sound) … to your fragmented! What does that mean, anyway? It sounds like one of those made up Star Trek words.

    Scotty: “She’s going to blow Captain!”

    Kirk: “How long have we got, Scotty?”

    Scotty: “Not long, Captain! I’m holding her together; but she is fragmenting as we speak!”

    Me: You are just trying to intimidate me with your fancy words.

    Spell Check: Fragmented!

    Me: Well, de-fragment me then! Should I change this word?

    Spell Check: Fragmented!

    Me: How about this word?

    Spell Check: Fragmented. And you misspelled “imp” again!

    Me: The word is Im! Im! Im!

    Spell Check: Then maybe you should put punctuation in it so I know!

    Me: ISN’T THAT WHAT YOU’RE HERE TO DO, @#$%%!

    Spell Check: I’m definitely underlining THAT!

    Me: OK. I haven’t the strength to argue with you anymore. I will write this later. I need to write out a shopping list anyway.

    (I type)

    1) Milk

    Spell Check: Oh, Oh, I know where the “2)” should go! Let me put it in for you!

    Me: Not you again! I don’t want a “2)” there!

    Spell Check: That’s really where it should go.

    Me: WELL I DON’T WANT IT THERE! TAKE IT OUT.

    Spell Check: MAKE ME!

    Me: Stoooooop! I can’t take it! (I throw myself down on the keyboard, as my Piscean husband comes in.)

    Husband:  How’s the writing going? (He asks tentatively.)

    Me: (Muffled through the keyboard): Okay, I guess.

    Husband: Have you been arguing with the spell check again?

    (I don’t answer. He quietly makes me a cup of tea and pulls out paper and pen from the drawer and hands it to me.)

    There’s something to be said for those calm Pisces people.

  • Sue the Screenwriter on falling in ‘unreal’ love

    SUZANNE KELMAN, Dec. 7, 2012

    “Love is in the Air … or at Least on the Page”

    We screenwriters are odd breed of storytellers. We live two lives. The first is the real one that does the washing, pays the bills and cleans the toilet. Then there’s the other “real” one that takes place in our heads, and where we fight courageous battles, win over our lost loves, defend our kingdoms and occasionally get murdered.

    I had an interesting experience with the current screenplay I’m writing; I actually fell in love with one of my characters, an unreal person who came out of my head!

    I’m not talking about the swoony “I fancy Mr. Darcy” kind of love; I am talking about a knot in my stomach, crying at songs on the radio and not being able to eat kind of love. My body actually manifested physical feelings, of the phantom pregnancy sort, the kind of love feeling I remember from 150 years ago, when I first met my husband on the other side of a bad 80s perm and pink spandex pants.

    It all started with a screenplay I am working on with my writing partner Rosie Woods. It’s a story about a woman who is willing to forsake the love of her life in order to allow some of the greatest works of historic literature to be written.

    The British actor Colin Firth at a film event in Britain in 2011. (Photo courtesy of the Coventry Telegraph)

    So in order to really understand the character, I was spending a lot of time working on what writers call the backstory, the story behind the story. Writers often create these to help them connect fully with their story. They basically come up with a life story for the person before the character enters the storyline. Some writers use cues. They may have a visual board of cuttings and photos that inspire their story, or listen to certain music from the time period they are working in. (At the Goody 2 writing studio we have a picture of Colin Firth on the wall. He seems to work for every story!)

    So anyway back to falling in love. I had emerged myself in this character’s life for a week. I wanted to learn as much as I could about the man behind the public person I had read about in books.

    And then, one morning I woke up, and the world looked a little brighter. The birds were singing a little sweeter and my coffee smelled a little “coffeeer” (Is that a word? I doubt it, but I don’t care because I’m in love!)  I wanted to go up to people and hug them for no reason; strange people, sad looking ferry workers or the guy slumped in his car holding a Seahawks travel mug as he stared Zombie-like at the water. I was up in the middle of the night with a knot in my stomach and I was breaking out in pimples.

    I couldn’t figure out what was going on, when suddenly it struck me like an anvil in a Roadrunner cartoon. I wasn’t sick. I was in love! Well, my body and emotions were in love, but my mind was telling me, “What do you two think you’re playing at?” It’s amazing what the power of the mind and one’s emotions can do when they work together.

    So if someone you don’t know comes up to you on the ferry and hugs you for no apparent reason, you don’t need to call 911. It’s probably just me, or another storyteller, whose just fallen in love with one of their characters.

    Watch out for those murder mystery writers!

    Suzanne Kelman is a multi-award winning screenwriter. Two of her screenplays have been optioned and are in development, while another is in pre-production and due to begin filming in Europe in 2013. Kelman currently enjoys teaching screenwriting classes each month at her home studio in Bayview. If interested, email suzkelman@gmail.com for details.

  • Sue the Screenwriter on the fight for characters

    SUZANNE KELMAN, Nov. 23, 2012

    “Writing Partners – The Good, the Bad and the Ugly”

    Writing with a writing partner can be great. Rosie Woods is my partner on some of my scripts and, on the whole, I love it and totally recommend it.

    But also be aware that in some ways a writing partnership can feel a bit like a marriage. There’s the good the bad and the ugly!

    The good is when a story is flowing and you are both finishing each other’s thoughts and sentences. The bad is when you have a critical story problem, which you are both trying desperately to solve, and the ugly is when two passionate storytellers think the story should go in a completely different direction.

    So, what happens when you find yourself knee-deep in the “ugly”?

    Rosie and I found ourselves in that position, while writing our most recent screenplay, “Violet Skye.”

    Our main character, “Violet,” seemed to have a mind of her own and we had been working our way through several structural issues that this character and her wayward traits had created for us. In trying to solve one of those problems, Rosie thought it might be a good idea to kill off one of her potential love interests, a direction I didn’t agree with. I found myself pleading for his life like a mother at a son’s stay of execution.

    It’s not that killing him off was a bad choice, ’cuz we had this other Colin Firth-type character waiting in the wings. But it would have made it a different story. So, on that day, our writing session went something like this:

    Rosie:  I think we should kill off David?

    Sue:  What?  No way! He’s the blonde, cute one.

    Rosie:  Well, Violet will never get to be with Marcus if we don’t.

    Sue:  Did I mention he’s the blonde, cute one?

    Rose:  But Marcus is Colin Firth in our heads, he is a better choice for Violet.

    Sue:  Every interesting man is Colin Firth in my head, but I still think we should keep the blonde, cute one. It’s a better resolution for the audience.

    Rosie:  I don’t think so. Marcus is a much more interesting choice.

    Sue:  But David is sexy, passionate and blonde!  He’s the one who stimulates her. You know I’m right.

    At this point, Rosie squints and tries to figure out her next move. She reaches for one of the cute little “wristies” she’s wearing and throws it at me. Then, I make another smart-assed comment (on purpose) and she responds by taking off the other one and throwing that one at me, too.

    I proceed to put on her wristies like I’ve just won a prize. (I love her personal style. Let’s see if she ever gets those back.)  Another 30 minutes of throwing clothing, pacing and pleading our cases ensues. In the end and in this particular instance, David lives, but only by the skin of his teeth. It could have gone either way.

    What I love about the ugly (the debate) is that we both have the same goal. Our choices are not dictated by ego, but rather by a passionate desire to tell the best version of our story.

    The good news about the ugly is that it always makes our story stronger. Whether a character lives or dies in one of our scripts is not incidental to a story. Each character has a place, a reason and a purpose for being there and after 30 minutes of the ugly, we know exactly what that is.

    I encourage you, potential screenwriters, to try writing with a partner. It can be really fun, but be aware that you may not always agree on what direction the story should go. However, don’t be afraid to challenge your writing partner about the story or to challenge your characters. If they are meant to be there, it will be obvious, no matter how many articles of clothing you and your partner throw at each other to get there.

    Suzanne Kelman is a multi-award winning screenwriter. Two of her screenplays have been optioned and are in development, while another is in pre-production and due to begin filming in Europe in 2013.  Kelman recently won “Best Overall” for her script “Illusion” in the 2012 Script-a-Thon contest. 

    Upcoming events:

    Kelman’s next session of her “Screenwriting 101” class will be from 10 a.m. to noon Saturday, Dec. 1 featuring a lesson in:  “How to write compelling dialogue and action lines that leap off the page.” The cost is $45 and classes are held in Bayview. To sign up, email suzkelman@gmail.com.

    November 23-26   at the Clyde Theatre in Langley: 

    “Cloud Atlas” at 7:30 p.m. shows Friday through Monday
    “Frankenweenie” at  5 p.m. shows Saturday and  Sunday

     

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